The Writing Mind

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A Whole New World

on 2013/05/31
mohammadali / Love Photos / CC BY-NC-SA

From atop a building, a new world appears as two people from different lives come together, sharing only a common heartbeat. As his head is down and hers is facing his, understanding happens.

~~For this week’s Trifextra’s Challenge http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/, the above image was described in 33 words.

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22 responses to “A Whole New World

  1. Christine says:

    I like the way you put that: “understanding happens.”

    • Maya Bahl says:

      Thank You Christine, I also very much like your response and your amazing use of imagery!

  2. Suzanne says:

    Nicely done! I also like the line “understanding happens” — lovely!

  3. Draug419 says:

    Nice summary of the picture (:

  4. That burst of understanding is worth all of the hard work of finding each other and coming together.

    Thank you for linking up!

  5. Mike says:

    Your words capture the moment so well.

  6. A wonderful serene moment.. I can see that also with your words

  7. oscarjamieson says:

    Beautiful piece, fantastic catharsis; Understanding happens. As if it is a product rather than an agent.

  8. jannatwrites says:

    Unspoken understanding is a beautiful thing.

    • Maya Bahl says:

      Thanks Janna, I find your piece humorous, and hope you did too! I agree 100% too that unspoken understanding is the best/beautiful thing! 🙂

  9. Mohammadali says:

    Many Thanks, I felt the same – The photographer 🙂

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